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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Colourless Shadow's of Midnight blue Surround my Somber heart With little light It strains to see, It's dreamboat Sail from 'thee. Waves of emotions Flowing into Black and white Passionate oceans Drowning within The depths of a Colourless, lifeless Life! Dark Angel. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Like a dream...well, some people's dreams, anyway...all in black and white! Great use of imagery here, Dark Angel! An altogether great poem.  Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
This is like a "silent cry" DA. Great poem |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Little Spyro, thank you for your lovely comment!! ----------------- Munda,thank you!! silent indeed!< !signature--> What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 01-30-2000).] |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
"lifeless life" -- I like the psychology. Very nice. ~Gene |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I agree! This is wonderful, Dark Angel! Sad yet beautiful! Denise |
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sirreen Junior Member
since 2000-01-16
Posts 19OR, USA |
Black and blue, the colors of suffering. Thanks for the read. sirreen |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I really like the first stanza Dark Angel....it says so much and with beautful imagery... Sad and beautifully written |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dark Angel- This summons some pretty vivid images. Nicely done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Hey! I like this!! Good job!  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dark Angel, very deep....I like it Tracie |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Hey Angel....colorless life? I don't think you have one of those....so WAKE UP!!! I think you are having a bad dream..hehe HUGS.... |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
DA this is beautiful sadness - very beautiful, well written work but very sad. Please call me if you need to talk : ) I'm always here for you.......hope that you're OK *worried* |
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