Open Poetry #5 |
Intellectual intercourse (adult content) |
Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
I think that I am now obssessed While finding love, I’m losing sleep. I rub my words against her chest I touch her heart and pinch its tip. She grips my mind with her tongue And licks my conscience all around. From all this joy, a poem sprung And I just could not keep it down. This quick-- I never thought to be And ink is dripping on her thighs. She leans on forward, kisses me-- This Muse has got me hypnotized! < !signature--> I fell in love and kept on falling [This message has been edited by Master (edited 01-30-2000).] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Glad to see that she's such an...hmm...inspiration to you Master!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Good Grief! Now I think I need to go have a "conversation" with my hubby! (wink wink....nudge nudge)- SEA |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
I "came" to a conclusion that I'm always safe with her (no STDs or nothing of that sort to worry about, althout she does get pregnant quiet often. Me and her already have over 250 poems). LOL [This message has been edited by Master (edited 01-29-2000).] |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
I've made some minor changes to this one, think it's better this way. |
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Buffpimp Junior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 39 |
This isvery good. I can see you love her very much. That is real good. Keep it up |
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Ted Reynolds Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 331 |
Neat, original, the best kind of bawdy. (I think you missed a beat in the fifth line.) Keep 'em coming. Here's to all of us (men and women) and our muses. Keep 'em coming. |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thank you everyone! (blushing) |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Blushing? Master, oh surely not poetic passion your muse has wrought and one can hardly believe it true her ministering's caused your crimson hue but that you've shared your muse's allure has given this reader a smile for sure. Claire |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Love the way you play with words, Master. |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Nice imagery. Very sexy innuendos. Gene |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thank you Meadowmuse for your little poem, it was well writen. Usually I don't "kiss and tell," this time it was an exception. Thank you Martie, playing with words is quiete fun. And U_gene, thank you for your comments, glad you liked it! |
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