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Master
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0 posted 2000-01-29 11:27 PM


I think that I am now obssessed
While finding love, I’m losing sleep.
I rub my words against her chest
I touch her heart and pinch its tip.

She grips my mind with her tongue
And licks my conscience all around.
From all this joy, a poem sprung
And I just could not keep it down.

This quick-- I never thought to be
And ink is dripping on her thighs.
She leans on forward, kisses me--
This Muse has got me hypnotized!


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 I fell in love and kept on falling





[This message has been edited by Master (edited 01-30-2000).]

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devina
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1 posted 2000-01-29 11:33 PM


Glad to see that she's such an...hmm...inspiration to you Master!!!  

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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2 posted 2000-01-29 11:53 PM


Good Grief! Now I think I need to go have a "conversation" with my hubby! (wink wink....nudge nudge)- SEA
Master
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3 posted 2000-01-29 11:55 PM


I "came" to a conclusion that I'm always safe with her (no STDs or nothing of that sort to worry about, althout she does get pregnant quiet often. Me and her already have over 250 poems). LOL

[This message has been edited by Master (edited 01-29-2000).]

Master
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4 posted 2000-01-30 10:13 AM


I've made some minor changes to this one, think it's better this way.
Buffpimp
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5 posted 2000-01-30 10:30 AM


This isvery good.  I can see you love her very much.  That is real good.  Keep it up

Ted Reynolds
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6 posted 2000-01-30 11:09 AM


Neat, original, the best kind of bawdy.  (I think you missed a beat in the fifth line.)  Keep 'em coming.  Here's to all of us (men and women) and our muses.  Keep 'em coming.  
Master
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7 posted 2000-01-30 02:29 PM


Thank you everyone! (blushing)
Meadowmuse
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8 posted 2000-01-30 02:44 PM


Blushing? Master, oh surely not
poetic passion your muse has wrought
and one can hardly believe it true
her ministering's caused your crimson hue

but that you've shared your muse's allure
has given this reader a smile for sure.

Claire

Martie
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9 posted 2000-01-30 03:16 PM


Love the way you play with words, Master.  
Gene
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10 posted 2000-01-30 03:19 PM


Nice imagery. Very sexy innuendos.

Gene

Master
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11 posted 2000-01-30 05:34 PM


Thank you Meadowmuse for your little poem, it was well writen. Usually I don't "kiss and tell," this time it was an exception.

Thank you Martie, playing with words is quiete fun.

And U_gene, thank you for your comments, glad you liked it!

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