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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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SEASON'S PASSING I think of you as days go by When nothing clouds the endless skies When Winter's long hard curse on things Turns unexpectedly into Spring When Summer's here and then it's gone And Autumn spreads its silent song It's times like these, in quiet memories Of a blowing breeze I think of you ...... [This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (edited 01-29-2000).] |
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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
Welcome! This is a lovely writing, leaving me with the aftertaste of true peacefulness. You're going to love this place!  Sherry"The finest qualities of our nature, like the bloom on fruits, can be preserved only by the most delicate handling. Yet, we do not treat ourselves nor another thus tenderly." ~Henry David Thoreau |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Sherry, Thanks for your support - this was my very first attempt at writing poetry - it was written for my first love who was killed in an automobile accident aged 16yrs... that was 23yrs ago now, but still he is with me in my heart.. Thanks again, I am enjoying reading your poetry too  )) Roniece[This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (edited 01-29-2000).] |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Welcome, Roniece. One of the things I like most about a poem, is when it has a nice flow. Yours has that! ~Gene  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Roniece! This is a beautiful poem. I enjoyed this very much! Please check your email for a special welcome! Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
WELCOME!! Love it! Hope to see more! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Roniece.... I enjoyed this poem a lot - then I read your explanation, and liked it even more... I, too, lost someone I loved 25 years ago - and think of him still.... I look forward to reading more of your work... Good name, too Passions welcomes you...  |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
"of a blowing breeze I think of you" Haunting! And so beautiful! Welcome to the family! |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
I love the seasons....they are so poetic. Good job |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Thank you to you all for commenting on my first submitted piece - I am very much enjoying reading thru and commenting on other's work - there is such talent here! You have made me feel most welcome ... Roniece [This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (edited 01-29-2000).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Roniece, You are a poet of my own heart, very romantic. Welcome to the Passions forum Liz |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Yes, welcome, welcome and welcome again, Roniece!!!!!  Great poem! Uh...could you teach me how to write like that sometime? Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Roniece- Lovely name. Lovely poem. Beautifully stated. Welcome to this wonderful family. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Welcome!!! Loved your innocense in this one, one's first love is always one to remember!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Oh, this poem jerked tears through my eyes, and left my soul quivering on the floor. I have been there. I know. I am so very sorry. Thank you for sharing. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Welcome here to the place of poetry and passion Your poem is a very very nice entrance I hope you will enjoy this site as much as I do PS: call your ISP for more time on the net you will need it.The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Buffpimp Junior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 39 |
Hey Roneice. This poem is very gratifying. I think you make a great addition to this community of poets. Keep it up |
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Koon Junior Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 43Singapore |
This poem is so simple yet so beautiful. Great job and hope to see more of your poems. Koon- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Roniece, I too would welcome you. Enjoyed your poem. |
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Deb Lynne Member
since 1999-08-19
Posts 180Where blue skies meet blue ocean |
Looks like you've found a new home & many new friends! |
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Manifested Destiny New Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 4 |
I thought your poem was really beautiful. I too know what it is like to lose your first love through death. |
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