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Degrees Of Love |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Degrees Of Love ~Marge Tindal~ So cold you'd surely think this was the frozen earth. The icy chill of a heart with no warmth. Along comes a new love and the temperature's rising. A few degrees make the difference and that's not surprising. Slowly with care, the heart starts to wear the signs of fire blazing everywhere. The temperature is rising in this heart of mine. I like the heat, it suits me fine. A love to warm this heart in my chest. Of all the degrees ... I like  best !~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wow Marge! Go for the heat sweetie, although how that heart of yours could get any warmer is beyond me. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks, Martie- Warm and wonderful. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is great, Marge! I love it!! HOT..HOT..HOT Denise |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Alright Marge! So hot, she ssssssssssizzles! Corinne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Now, Denise- You're turning the thermostat up way too high! Corrine- Sizzling? Well, it would be a welcomed change from the cold, huh? ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge, reading your poems is always a pleasure. You write from the heart, and I can feel the heat!  -SEA |
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d.schultz Junior Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 43 |
Marge, I agree warm and wonderful  |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Whew, is it warm in here or is it just you? It's you, warm and wonderful--I agree.~Gene |
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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
That's a cute one, Marge...temperature is going in reverse here, what does that mean?  Sherry "The finest qualities of our nature, like the bloom on fruits, can be preserved only by the most delicate handling. Yet, we do not treat ourselves nor another thus tenderly." ~Henry David Thoreau |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Hey, Marge! I'l like to be the fire That fills that heart with hot desire. I'd like to be that red-hot flame To burn you up and feel the same. Please let me warm your chilly night With new degrees of Fahrenheit And chase away the evening chill With passion 'till you've had your fill. Fire rescue needs to be on call If I'm allowed to give my all The sun's hot spots will pale beside The heat I'll make you feel inside. We'll have cumbustibility If you will give that heart to me So what say, Marge? Unlock that latch Let's see if we can make a match! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA- So glad you enjoy what I write. Thanks for telling me. Dayla- Glad you enjoyed it too. U_Gene- ME ! Tee-Hee ! SimplyYrrehS- Means you need a new thermostat? Or may a new repairman? Or another log for the fire? Thanks for the read, gal. Stay warm in S.C. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer- Hmmmmm ! Nicest invitation I've had tonight. You've met your match ... strike me and see where you light ! Come on, Baby ... light my fire !  Love you ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you, Roniece- So glad you liked it. I do try to have fun ! ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Speaking of hot--you're on FIRE! This is a great poem! And speaking of fire...hmm...would you like fire-breathing lessons? Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Dear Marge, Fantastic poem! Piles of fun! You've had Dale and me in stitches of laughter tonight! We didn't know you had it in you! Go for it, girl! My husband sings ballads to me - the likes of which could not be beat - I fell head over heels as a teenager, and here I am, so many years later, and still melting in puddles at his feet! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Now, Sam ... Didn't anyone tell you that my second profession is as a pyrotechnist? Fire-breathing dragons are right up my alley. Honey, I don't TAKE lessons, I GIVE 'em ! Rosemary and Dale- Well life must be producing 'cabin fever' if you can't find something more amusing than little ole me ! (But, thanks) Glad to know I'm the subject of discussion and laughter in your home and in your hearts. Thanks ... now, throw another log on the fire ! So nice to sit at the hearth of a friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Marge - great poem from a great lady. i like the way you moved from cold to hot with that sweet transition. 'Deer - great response! Remember, only YOU can invent forest fires. |
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Buffpimp Junior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 39 |
Really good. I Wish my temperature would rise. You very lucky to have that feeling. Well keep it up, it was very good reading. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Well what have we here Not only a nice poem But (blush) a hot hot lady too Just check your temperature control Marge How sweet The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Delightful Marge....enjoy that fire Love this poem A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LongJhn- Why, thank you kind sir. LOL@'inventing' for Balladeer. Buff- Thank you for your comments. Helmut- Thank you, friend. Temperature gauge under control. Pepper- Tee Hee !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Safwan Arekat Junior Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 38Bahrain |
Well..I feel myself warming. Thank you for the hotttt poem Safwan |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I always have preferred warmth over the arctic tundra...... Nice one, my friend... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Safwan- Thanks for the read. Nan- I'd send you some of this gorgeous Florida sunshine if I could. Here's wishing you a warming trend. Oh, yeah ... and in the weather too! Thanks for liking. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very cute |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Lady~ You are smokin'  TSSSS...... |
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