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Koon Junior Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 43Singapore |
Man stumble upon it But pick themselves up and run. They dismiss this **** Thinking they could have much more fun. They regard a fake As the divine truth itself. God himself cannot forsake Those that cannot save oneself. Truth hurts like a piercing knife Killing those that refuse to believe. Yet it stands harder than rock, longer than life Saving those that believe for they can achieve. May you search for the truth in you Before truth comes to search the fake of you. Koon- |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
A profound message indeed! Good writing, DH |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee Chee- What truths are writ within these lines. Wonderful ... just wonderful. Thank you for sharing. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Koon Junior Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 43Singapore |
All I can say is thank you for reading this lil' poem of mine. Koon- |
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Buffpimp Junior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 39 |
Once again Koon, I am deeply mezmerized by your array of talent in poetry. I hope one day that I can write like this. I am still trying. Loved the sonnet by the way Patrick |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Yes, very profound! Can't wait to read more from you, Koon. |
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Koon Junior Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 43Singapore |
Thanx for the support guys!! I wonder if I can keep up with you guys.  Koon- |
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