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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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Endlessly Endlessly I wait for you Endlessly I'm yours Endlessly I give you my heart Endlessly for sure All my love All my soul I give to you for all time so endlessly I wait for you, until you can be mine Someday I won't have to wait, endlessly for you because someday you'll be mine and my endless days will be through |
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Koon Junior Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 43Singapore |
Good luck in your wait.....coz I'm waiting for mine too.... |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
The waiting is the hardes't part... except for the getting -- and then the happily ever after -- nice poem here!!! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear koon Thankyou for your reply. Yes I have found my true love, this poem was written along time ago and I'm endlessly in love now. I hope you find yours soon.  tracie |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Local rebel nice reply, Thanks tracie |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Your wait will soon be over my friend. . . I know that I finally had to MAKE mine end. . . but sometimes, we do what we have to do. . . Beautiful words. . . they perfectly express how I was feeling before I didn't have to wait any longer. . . --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Tracie...a lovely expression of feelings into words |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven thankyou my friend for your sweet reply. Yes my wait is over has been for about 14 years now. I wrote this poem along time ago. Thanks once again for your reply tracie |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Ruth I thankyou also for your reply. much appreciated. tracie  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Tracie! I hope your dreams come true! Denise |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
thanks for your reply Denise. My dreams did come true....Tracie |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Now you can love him endlessly Sweet poem. I like it Liz |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Thanks Liz for reading my poem...Tracie |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Endlessly I could have kept on reading Endlessly I wanted this to linger on Endlessly I like to read this But I guess I have to let you go, so you can go on What a nice piece tracie66, well done The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Tracie - The idea of time fits so well with true love because the times when two lovers are apart seem endless, and the times they are together seem to end too soon. This is a very sweet poem. |
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Buffpimp Junior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 39 |
This is very touching. I am currently waiting "endlessly" for my love too. KEep it up |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Thanks to Helmut, LngJhnAg and Buffpimp for your comments much appreciated...Tracie  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tracie, that wait felt like forever huh! So glad your love is with you now!  -SEA |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Sea thankyou for your reply my endless days are over... |
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