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The Trail of Utter Woe
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The Trail of Utter Woe |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Far from realities sleeve Lost in fantasy's make believe Caught within a web of greed On The Trail of Utter Woe As mystery binds its crusted branch And Adapa clings to heavens glance Forlorn live, with out a chance On The Trail of Utter Woe A Kingdom of poor deceit Filled with starvation's grief Where dead Mermaids lie on coral reef On The Trail of Utter Woe The search of Amrita, an endless path Sanity sent by Sati's wrath As feathers outweigh souls who pass On The Trail of Utter Woe Where Shu will cast the spirits high As the sun is removed from the sky No gold or mirth, in soil lie On The Trail of Utter Woe ©tori 2000 If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Hey Tori, you graced us with some of your wonderful writing!! And I see you got your picture uploaded too! YEAH!! You look good with short hair too!  |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Yeah kinda got it squished in there. lol. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Hey Tori A nice poem you have presented there Just one thing, do such nice creatures have to die? I don't think that Walt Disney would agree. "Where dead Mermaids lie on coral reef" Can I go and revieve them Still I love the poem. And the picture The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Helmut depends on the Type's of Mermaids.. just aske them sailors that end up on the ocan floor how they got there?..lol as in "Death Song"...your a trip bud....lol Can't help but love ya.. If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tori, When it comes to writing you're no slouch Your tale of woe just filled the pouch. It took the feathers from my bed And filled it full of thorns instead. Wonderful poem. |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
lol.. ditto sey!  0 |
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