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Because of You
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Because of You |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Because of you I view the world through a different pair of eyes It takes control and grabs my soul and makes me realize That the child within has been released and now tells me what to do To spread my love across the land and it's all because of you Because of you I feel the love that I thought would never be A love so pure and so sweet is what you give to me I write these words upon this page so that the world can't misconstrue That the feelings I have deep in my heart are all because of you G.A. Webb |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I do hope you shared these words with her....wonderfully romantic are they  |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Hoot...I e-mailed this to her when I wrote it a while ago. She didn't have too much to say about it other than the fact that she liked it. I fear my words have become nothing more than a novelty to her. That's why I don't write love poems any more. The ones I have posted and the few I have left to post were written some time ago. Let's just say that I've lost my inspiration in that area. If you check out Dark Passions you'll see what I mean. Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. G [This message has been edited by G. A. Webb (edited 01-28-2000).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, I'm sorry to hear it, G.A. At least you had the feeling and made the effort. That counts, if not for her, at least for you. Good writing. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
G A...to be told that one is the impetus and inspiration that you've written about here would bring the most grand sense of sweetness...this is a wonderful tribute. I hope she'll come round. Claire |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so beautiful! Very very nice! Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
GA I love your poem!! I'm sorry to hear that she didn't say to much about it! Certainly her loss! But I hope there comes a time when you will be inspired again. You do so well with those words. <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sometimes sorrow itself can be an inspiration to write. Anything you feel can be put into words, and may turn out to be your best. Please don't ever stop writing Liz |
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