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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Balladeer's getting a Mercedes today Oh Boy! Oh Boy! Oh Boy! This is the car he's dreamed of His pride, his joy, his toy Can't you see him tooling around town? So handsome for all to see The ladies waving their hankies around "Oh please Sir...Please notice me!" So our Balladeer's getting his Mercedes today A dream it seems has come true The man, the car, the ladies, the power Happy driving my 'Deer to you... Okay guys, give me a break!...The medication, you know....hehehe |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
*smiling widely here* what a way to make an announcement my friend  Congrats Balladeer |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Pepper! You posted a wonderful poem! I'm jumping up and down! Way to go! Liz |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hey Shannon, can I have some of that medicine? What is it called, Muse elixer? Loved your poem! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Love your poem, Pepper!!!!! And congrats to Balladeer! |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Baladeer was seen tooling round town His brow was furrowed His gaze cast down Everyone said 'Oh Deer Please what could it Be??' To which he replied, 'Merce(y)dese payments -- they're killing me!!' Very nice work Pepper!!! Congratulations Baladeer (BTW Pepper -- you asked me sometime back about getting Cuban Cigars -- you have to go to Canada or Mexico to get them -- but they really aren't worth the trouble dear -- the Domincan's are just as good and sometimes better -- but they all come from 'Cuban Seed' tobacco -- which was my reference in that poem.) |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Pepper: LOL...How long before a poem emerges from Bal about his new pride'n'joy? Well done sweetheart...*g* HUSG Memories give you the power to collect roses in the winter... |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Gee, I'm sorry for all the confusion, folks. You see, I met this cute little Cuban girl on South Beach last week named Mercedes and when I said I was picking up ....ONLY KIDDING!!! Pepper, this is a fantastic poem, you self-proclaimed non-writing poet, you. Man, you can write with the best of them! Thanks for all the nice comments....you have it right, Rebel. But I've been a junk and clunker kind of guy all my life (like a Toerag, you know) so I just said why not??? God bless bugs!!!!  |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wooohoooooo...way to go, Pepper!! See, I said you were a poet!!! This is great!!! Congrats, Balladeer....I guess them darn bugs are good for something after all! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Thank you Hoot, I'm so glad to see that smile ..and btw., it's very becoming on you! Liz, Thank you for the wonderful...means alot to me Martie, I'll share my muse, if you'll share yours..Now who do you suppose gets the better deal here? Suthern, Thank you for your comment....I'm smiling big time Local Rebel, Wow..I've never had a poem of mine inspire a poetry reply That's really cool! And thank you for the cigar info Rainbow, I don't have an answer to your question..just a guess. Knowing how men love their cars..shouldn't be too long,eh?... lol Thank you for all your support HUSG... Denise, A WhoooHooooo...WhooHoo! Thank you very much Balladeer,ROFL@^$*% Cuban girl named Mercedes.... What are you doing at home? Get in that gorgeous car, open up the sun roof, turn on the sounds and maybe head on down to South Beach.. LOL |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Pepper this was fantastic! Looks as though I'm a little late here...hehe thank for letting me know. Balladeer's right ya know...you do it with the best of them...and I meant writing poetry! Hugs to ya!! Congrats Bal! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Pepper, You're a simply wonderful poet....  Deer.... Can I have a ride???  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Pepper- This is precious and wonderful. And of course I'm happy for Balladeer. I'm not even jealous or anything ! I'm not ! Can't think of a nicer fellow for it to come to. Way to go, Michael. I'm not even jealous or anything ! Oh, can we put the top down and go to the beach ? KAMLA ! .... Balladeer's going 'nekkid' to the beach ! But it's okay ... I've got a towel for him ! Pepper .... keep those news stories coming. Great poetic announcement, gal. Love ... love .... love ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
What a special treat! A poem from Pepper! I swear there was another member around here with that same name who said "I can't write poetry"..hmmm...couldn't be the same one, as this Pepper can! She just proved it! Good one!!!  |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I can't say it any better than Devine just did....great poem Pepper and please, please, write more....also without the medication  |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Whatever pills you having send me one What a nice poem and so well done A "Mercedes" and the pill Watch out there Balladeer don't hit an oily spill "Mercedes" was the daughter from Mr Daimler or Mr Benz For Balladeer another "Girl" I guess it's all what depends lol So ladies don't step up in line He is with a four wheeled Lady and ain't on a set of in-line' I guess I let him drive the "better" (Star class) Well done there, I enjoyed this Pepper |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
WhtDove, Thank you Dovey...fantastic is, well, fantastic.. Nan, Gee..thank you so much for your encouragement.."wonderful poet"..me?...WOW Marge, ROFL.."I'm not even jealous or anything"...hehehe...my sentiments exactly! Thank you & love, love,love, right back at you.. PdV...Your reply thrilled me! ...if you think I'm a poet...well then, ..maybe I am? Thank you so very much... Munda, Thank you much for your lovely reply Helmut, Love your poem reply lol...Thank you for reading and commenting...I really enjoy your work |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Whoo Hoo Pepper! I love it when you write! Great job girl. Mike...*putting on my best dress and waiting on the bug man's shiny car to drive byt so I can hike up the hem line and catch a ride* ...lol |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pepper, Well you just proved what I said all along, you can write with the best of them. A wonderful poem and news I did not know. Mike never mentioned the Mercedes to me. Post more we do so enloy your poems. *L* Sy |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Bravo Bravo Lady! A poet you say you are not but the words flow and never stop I've seen it all along waiting to crop So let it flow from within you I will read them all not just one or two. ----------------------------------------- Michael's on the road with his new wheels Giving all the ladies chills His charasmatic words will not be a need when he drive up on Main with his new steed. A true stud muffin you are Mr. 'deer Watch out ladies Bal has new gear. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Bravo Pepper!! Funny and well done Studley take me cruising please? Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Excuse me, 'deer?!! But WHAT, hmmhmm, happened to the JET? So you want to be on MY priority list huh? HUMPH...well, sniff, sob, I see how far down I am on yours... waaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiiiilllllllllll!! Here come those hills again... Pepper - I admire your poetry my friend - and you certainly can write!! (Though for a meanie like 'deer who has spurned me yet again...) I will never believe you cannot write...please give us more!!! Marge(y)...I'm all for it...but I certainly will spend a lot of time looking at the sky... K |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Pepper, this was so fun to read! Glad he got the toy of his dreams.....me, I'm holding out for that little red corvette! -SEA |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Pepper, you didn't tell me you posted this...keeping secrets? Kudos, dear girl, albeit it COULD have been the meds... And Deer, no matter whether the Mercedes is girl or wheels, IT probably has one classy chassey. Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Buffpimp Junior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 39 |
This poem I enjoyed very much. And then to find out that Mercedes is a girl . OH MY!!! Well good job and keep these upbeat poems coming. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Marilyn, Sy, Julie, Isis, Severn, Sea, Sunshine & Buffpimp..... Thank you very much for your wonderful replies I really appreciate you all What a great family of friends.....[This message has been edited by Pepper (edited 01-30-2000).] |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Gotta bring this one back so everybody can see how beautiful our Pepper is, outside as well as in. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I agree, Balladeer! She is as beautiful as her heart! Denise |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
LOL Pepper I loved this....truly a wonderful and endearing piece Jenny |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
How I miss this sweet Lady! |
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