Don't wait till we go wrong

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Open Poetry #5

Don't wait till we go wrong

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2000-01-27 11:13 AM

Don't,
Don't wait till we go wrong,
For any reason,
We do for anything,
Your heart can hold
For the moment,
you're waiting for,
You should see first,
Then wait till we go wrong,

Don't loose your ways,
Where you're leading to,
Don't loose your heart,
If you wouldn't find
what you're searching for,
Don't wait for
what we're going through,

Wait till the morning comes,
When morning rains starts,
All over again,
You don't know
how the night's can grow longer,
Till we find pieces of hearts
on the floor,
So don't wait till we go wrong,

Let's hold for the moment
you have been waiting for,
Let's hold our breathes,
Till we find the right way,
To walk our souls to the top
of the world,
Don't wait till we go wrong,

[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 01-27-2000).]

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-01-27 11:17 AM

'To walk our souls to the top of the world'

I love that!! Lovely thoughts and sentiments in this, Vandana!

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2000-01-27 11:25 AM

Lovely, lovely verse, vanana,
Your thoughts sometimes are very echanting.
Liz

Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

3 posted 2000-01-27 11:47 AM

another nice one Vandana... enjoyed.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

4 posted 2000-02-05 09:45 AM

This really hit home today!

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When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?

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