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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Heavens Vessel Over the bridge of a rainbow, Tarrying in greeneries meadow. We hear the bells of past in chime, Pealing from another time. In waves of serendipity, From knolls of past humanity. The sands and dust of former ties And remnants of some last goodbyes. It's here the waters flow like tears, From happiness, or sad, or fears. It's here forgiveness turns to fate And here commitments rain to late. All things are laid in common dust And all depends on common trust. It is the life of greenery. It is, what grew the Adam Tree. It is the focus and a flow, Of everything that we know. It is the beginning and end. It is the bowl the soul my friend. So dream your meadow of the greens. And walk the rainbow to your dreams. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
One of the better poems I have read. Excellent work! DH |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, I don't have words for this, it's so beautiful. You have written a wealth of treasured poems of late, and this is another Love ya Liz |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Seymour, very interesting poem, one that I can enjoy reading many times. Parker |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
The master did it again When will he write the next one, when I can see literally the meadow and the 'bow You have painted such a picturesque show The dream is in it for that I'm in so deep The only problem is...to find the time to sleep  The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You've painted this picture well Sy, of course I'd expect nothing less than brilliant from you!!!  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
You really know how to paint with words! I loved the phrase "It's here that water flows like tears, From happiness, or sad, or fears." Well done again. Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"All things are laid in common dust And all depends on common trust." These are some of the truest words I have seen written in a long time. You have found what I have been looking for, I am glad you took the time to put it to pen. Well done, my friend. Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Danny, Thank you for the excellent. Elizabeth, I love sweets, thank you. Love Sy Haleyja, Thank you so much. Helmut, Beautiful comment, thank you. Devina, You are a sweet dear, thank you. Liz, Thank you for the well done. Sunshine, You picked out the meat and I hope you enjoyed the gravy *L* Sy |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Soooooo beautiful, Seymour! Your words are never a disappointment! Denise |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'm walking my rainbows, Sy...  |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Another excellent effort, Sy. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Seymour, you made me feel full of hopes and dreams. This is so great! -SEA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise, thank you for the sooo beautiful *L* Nan, I know you are. *L* Sy Balladeer, Thank you my friend. Sea, Thank you so much, wonderful comment. |
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