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elessar New Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 2 |
to you i am just a friend and this i do not want to end i want it to grow into something bigger but how to do this i can not figure our friendship is something i want to keep but without you as mine i cannot sleep i lie awake and think of what it would be like to have you as mine for just one night to show you i care about you more than others to show you how beatiful we could be as lovers id do anything at all just to be with you id climb the higest mountain to be with you id dive to the deepest depths to be with you id be myself, just to be with you as you may be able to tell from this and my first poem i have strong feelings for someone, who does not know, and i fear telling for fear of losing a good friendship which has helped me through other hard times, yet if she felt the same way i would be completed...quite a dilemma, perhaps i will just go with what my heart says |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Welcome to passions  I can live with the idea That we are merely actors Playing a part But I do wish Whoever is writing my script Would learn to use A few more Happy Endings ~Javan |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
The heart is usually a good place to begin...and if she doesn't feel the same for you as you feel for her, that wouldn't necessarily mean the end of the friendship...and from experience I can tell you that no other person should be your completeness....that has to come from withing yourself.....neediness can tend to drive people away...the last thing that you would want. Very nice poem! |
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