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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-01-27 02:22 AM


ive bled a line or two for you
it goes and comes
red eclipses and combines
with life
to make them want the reject
with no feeling too
siding with all the hateful things
just to prove the means to an end
the open daggers..my insides exposed
can be your meaningless excuse..
and your only friend


© Copyright 2000 John Dixon - All Rights Reserved
devina
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539
Cali
1 posted 2000-01-27 03:31 AM


Very deep thoughts here my friend!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 2000-01-27 10:41 AM


There is much power in your words Jackal
Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-01-27 10:53 AM


I agree, powerful and painful.

Denise

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