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Parker
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0 posted 2000-01-18 03:57 PM


I fear the night,
(Dreams of the Raven Haired Girl)          
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I fear the night,                                    
not the darkness, not the shadows                    
that run from the moonbeams, searching light          
but the evil of the moments, of their eternity        
that creeping hand of time, extending, unrelenting.  
I fear the night                                      
Not the Quiet, Not the stillness.                    
that should bring me the comfort                      
Of my security, of my sleep.                          
But the thoughts,                                    
of the Raven, of the kiss                            
the Raging dreams, of her passion                    
of her eyes, of her love                              
I fear the night,                                    
not its coming, not its going,                        
the wish for love, for dreams, for Romance,          
But the unknowing, of her distance, of her absence    
that she may never really be, in my arms,            
as I dream, in the night.                            
                                                      
James Parker Haley @1994                              




[This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 01-27-2000).]

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-01-18 04:02 PM


Another great poem, James! Very nice!

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~


poetFemmeFatale
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2 posted 2000-01-18 04:05 PM


You've uncovered some hidden secrets I think many in here can relate to...our fears.  This was outstanding!  I really like your style of writing....it just flows and flows.  I think you dug deep for these thoughts you shared here.  Thank you ....

 ** I'm reaching for the brightest star I've ever seen - knock my ladder out from under me, and you'll wish you hadn't !! -pFF ** Here's to 2000!

Parker
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3 posted 2000-01-18 04:23 PM


Thank you denise, your always so kind.  

poetFemmeFatale, thank you, I find the digging helps the healing.

Parker


Danny Holloway
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4 posted 2000-01-18 04:33 PM


Enjoyable reading!  
DH

 

Parker
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5 posted 2000-01-18 04:53 PM


Thanks Danny glad you liked it.
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6 posted 2000-01-18 05:26 PM


Again...well done  
Parker
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7 posted 2000-01-19 11:34 AM


Thank you hoot, glad you like it.

Parker

devina
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8 posted 2000-01-27 03:45 AM


Sorry I missed this one along the way...twas all my loss James, your way with words impresses to say the least!~D

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Parker
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9 posted 2000-01-27 10:07 AM


devina, thank your very much, that is very welcome praise from such a wonderful poet as yourself.  

Parker

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Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2000-01-27 10:18 AM


Haleyja,
Strong and well done, I enjoyed the read.

Parker
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11 posted 2000-01-27 11:55 AM


Seymour, thank you, it was fun to write.

Parker

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