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hoot_owl_rn
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0 posted 2000-01-26 09:15 AM


Catharsis: Purification or purgation of emotions primarily through art ~Webster

Catharsis

Words
inked onto paper
in rhythm and rhyme
cleansing my soul
with every line
bled from my heart
they pour from my fingers
washing you away
‘till all that lingers
are words


 I can live with the idea
That we are all merely actors
Playing a part
But I do wish
Whoever is writing my script
Would learn to use
A few more Happy Endings
~Javan




[This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 01-26-2000).]

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WolfsMate
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1 posted 2000-01-26 09:20 AM


Writing so eases the pain at times. Excellent verse.

 

fc
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2 posted 2000-01-26 11:15 AM


wow....you write this so perfectly, and you write for my soul as well ..thanks ruth
Parker
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3 posted 2000-01-26 11:33 AM


Hoot, I really like this poem, and the line
"they pour from my fingers" very interesting.

Parker

Martie
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4 posted 2000-01-26 02:25 PM


A poetic catharsis is such a healing thing.  May it bring you peace and pleasure.  "All that linger are words"--loved this line.
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5 posted 2000-01-26 03:12 PM


And the words touch another's heart... Well done, Hoot! *S*
Severn
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6 posted 2000-01-26 03:28 PM


And without that carthasis many would be lost! This is lovely as usual...glad you have your carthasis, Ruth...

K

 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath

Pepper
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7 posted 2000-01-26 04:07 PM


Simply lovely Hoot...

"'til all that lingers are words"
I'll echo Suthern here....she spoke my thoughts too,.... most eloquently...




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Denise
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8 posted 2000-01-26 07:45 PM


Some of the things we write out of our pain are some of the best that we do. Plus, I can't think of any better therepy! This is lovely, Ruth. Keep writing!  

Denise

hoot_owl_rn
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9 posted 2000-01-27 11:33 AM


Thanks everyone...I use my poetry often for cleansing, and sometimes it results in some very deep and overly sad poems. I appologize for that at times  

 I can live with the idea
That we are merely actors
Playing a part
But I do wish
Whoever is writing my script
Would learn to use
A few more Happy Endings
~Javan

HelmutB
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10 posted 2000-01-27 01:05 PM


To write the way you describe
Is like to search your soul
And you do it so beautifully
Knowing that you there makes writing worth my while.


 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


Nicole
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11 posted 2000-01-27 01:12 PM


Although sometimes you may pen poems that are heartbreaking enough to cause tears to fall from these eyes, each and every poem you write shines with the beautiful soul that is you.     Wonderful job with this one!

 May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

--Author Unknown

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12 posted 2000-01-27 01:25 PM


Guess ya didn't want anyone asking for the dictionary huh Ruth???? This poem rings true in my heart as well.  Through poetry, I've learned to cleanse my soul and heal as well!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Nan
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13 posted 2000-02-01 07:20 AM


AHA! - That's why I feel so drained after I finish a poem.....
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14 posted 2000-02-06 12:18 PM


Left in Awe at this Ruth.  What a eye opener

 I used to be schizophrenic, but we're ok now so don't make me mad cause I'm running out of places to hide the bodies......LOL



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15 posted 2000-02-06 12:39 PM


Hoot-
Lady, this one slipped by me.
(Thank you, David, for bringing it up)

Funny, I never thought about writing as a soul-cleansing process before I read this.
I can see how it is for some people.
I have often advised people to write, write, write ... never realized exactly what I was saying to them about getting it out before.

Thank you for an insight into me.

I guess I write because ...... it's there.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Elizabeth Santos
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16 posted 2000-02-06 12:43 PM


Hoot, You not only write from the heart, you do it with such ease. This is so lovely.
Liz

hoot_owl_rn
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17 posted 2000-02-06 08:42 AM


Thank you everyone...I know no other way to write but to bleed out my heart into words...not always a good thing I'm afraid.
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18 posted 2000-02-06 08:57 AM


i write stuff sometimes to vent out all my anger and frustrations---just never knew the process is called "catharsis"
loved this")

Christopher
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19 posted 2000-02-06 06:12 PM


Ruth,
This my friend, is what poetry is about!
I read this. Then I read it again and again until I had it memorized. I realize it's a short piece, but somehow you managed to pack the power of an entire civilization's written word into it!
This piece, so true, so welcome, has left a mark on me to be sure. No offense to anyone else, or to any of your other poetry... but this has taken over the spot of my all-time favorite "Passion Poem!"
Awesome my friend, your gift shines through in these words.

Chris

hoot_owl_rn
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20 posted 2000-02-07 11:01 AM


Wow...Christopher...you have me blushing with that comment. Thank you so very much, it means a great deal and even more so coming from you  
Corinne
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21 posted 2000-02-07 07:19 PM


Absolutely beautiful!


Corinne

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22 posted 2000-02-09 11:10 PM


Hoot, you write so beautifully.  I'm sure I will still be thinking about this one long after I'm in bed.  Thanks.
Danny Holloway
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23 posted 2000-02-10 09:48 AM


You are one of the stand out poets in Passions as evidenced each time you post your poetry. It's more than the words you pen, its the feelings you express and it comes from where we all really live, in our minds, heart and soul.
Danny

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