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UNTITLED (my love and his girlfriend)
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UNTITLED (my love and his girlfriend) |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN 
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As i see you standing next to her I can't help but wonder why? You keep calling her baby and a tear drops from my eye. I wanna be the one that you hold tight. Tell me again...why cant you be with me tonight? [This message has been edited by just_another_fe (edited 02-17-2000).] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I can feel your longing in this one...you have created a good image here...but a little hint...your poems will get more response if you put them on one a day!!! Welcome!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
thanx for the hint.  |
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gypsyqlt Member
since 2000-02-08
Posts 147Bradford,Vt USA |
Oh Boy. Personally, i'm touched. I'm dealing right now with "my husband and the other woman". Painful stuff, this. I like this a lot. Very clear, to the point. I'd like more of it, though.Jocelyn |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
thank you gypsyqlt. im sorry to hear you have to go through this sitution.  i wouldnt wish it on anyone. ill try to expand on it and see what i come up with |
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