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Kevin Taylor Member
since 1999-12-23
Posts 185near Vancouver, BC, Canada 
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. fold me, hold me like a dove kiss me, miss me when I'm near touch me, touch me while I live Don't wait until I die, my love gently, softly like a prayer tuck me, send me hold my hand call me, hear me from above Defend me when I fall, my love Kevin "Poetry is, at once, what you get... and how you got there." |
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kaleidoscope Junior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 38 |
This is great! Tender, brief, meaningful. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I really like this...its sparity serves it well.  'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I am familiar with this feeling and you have expressed it for me. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Kevin, I love the message of this poem...and reading it, very slowly, the second time through, I was thinking how lovely and moving it would be, sung something like kdlang's "Save Me." Really do love this. Claire |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely, Kevin! |
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