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Dancing In The Shadows (hoot's challenge)
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Dancing In The Shadows (hoot's challenge) |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Darkness has fallen, but the night is still so bright. Dancing in the shadows of the moonlight tonight. Music playing softly, as we take another sip of wine. I see the twinkle in your eyes, as I catch them watching mine. The mood of the night is so peaceful and serene. This mystical moment is almost like a dream. The sensation of this evening stirs a passion deep within. As I hear your soothing whisper carried on the gentle wind. And as this midnight escapade continues to unfold. We find within each other, a treasure to behold. As our shadows from the moonlight dance upon the wall. Together we will savor the enchantment of it all. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Eloise my friend - this is beautiful! So softly flowing... And as this midnight escapade continues to unfold. We find within each other, a treasure to behold. Simply lovely lines - a wonderful image.  K'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You capture a romantic moment in this lovely poem. Very beautiful Liz |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lovely, lovely lines, Eloise. Softly playing through my mind, like melodies of another time. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very beautiful. The assortment I'm getting with this challange is almost overwhelming |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Kamla, Liz, Marge and Ruth, thank you all so much for your kind words. Ruth this was a great challenge, and a wonderful assortment of responses at that. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
A worthy response to the challenge. Well done! DH |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Simply beautiful, Eloise! And romantic! Well done! Denise |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I'll have to echo Denise-Beautiful and Romantic! Enjoyed the read. -SEA |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Ah, this sets one to longing, now doesn't it..? Well done, Eloise ... --Kess Full fathom five thy father lies, Of his bones are coral made, Those are pearls that were his eyes; Nothing of him that doth fade But doth suffer a sea-change Into something rich and strange... --William Shakespeare, from The Tempest |
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