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Candy Junior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 17 |
Things never last, they always seem to pass. Just as you think everything is ok, it all goes away. You cant do anything about it. It wasn't your choice. What is there to do after you lose the one who means the most. Nothing ever goes right, everything is wrong. The person you love is gone. With the wind he blows away, He doesn't want to be with you another day You hold back the tears, just so he won't hear the thing you fear. Maybe one day he will return to call my own. Not to feel stuck, but just to love. Its so hard to believe Theres nothing you can do But hope that he still truly loves you. Candy |
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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
S A L U T A T I O N S and Welcome, Candy. This is a well-written poem, filled with quite some meaning. Leaves me feeling a little sad at heart. I hope that this feeling of "things never last" are not staying with you, as you'll find there are many things of permanence in this world. Example...the Passions Forum in which you have landed! You'll find no other family online like the people in here. Look forward to reading more from you.  Sherry "Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Candy! This is a very sad poem.....I hope all your dreams come true! Please check your email for a special welcome! Denise |
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minime New Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 8 |
I like your poem! it was very good! =) |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Candy - this is so bittersweet. And Sherry has said it all - this is a wonderful family, so WELCOME! 'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Laurel Junior Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 22 |
I guess everyone has gotten a broken heart at least once. This is sad. I hope you find someone who doesn't break your heart! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Candy, WELCOME! Your poem was so very sad.Touched my heart. I hope it works out.....I'll be looking for more from you!  -SEA |
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jascanvey Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 130England |
Welcome Candy, what a wonderfully emotional poem to enter with. |
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Candy Junior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 17 |
Thanks for the replys. I have felt very welcomed here. Thanks again. Candy |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
Candy- Welcome to passions. Very nicely written poem. I can definately relate. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. "Life's greatest mystery isn't the meaning of life. To love and be loved is the meaning of life. Now how to attain those is the greatest mystery of all." |
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AEYVONNE New Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 4 |
Candy that was awesome. It had alot a meaning. It really hit home. I hope you find that love you want. Sincerely Me Yvonne |
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Alias Junior Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 30 |
i want to say that i really enjoyed your poem and i know how you feel. I also want to thank everybody here at passions.. you have made me feel very welcome, and i have only been here a couple of days.. thanks everyone.  Alias |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
welcome, nice poem! |
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