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Captured Bliss
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Captured Bliss |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Captured Bliss On bluff above the ocean’s curl a place of delicious wedding swirl I watched the tide ebb with the day and soaked in magic from sun rays The bride in white was all a flutter her mother set her gaze in utter awe of scene beneath the knoll where sea such magic display scrolled The breeze so touched the gauze of veil in graceful dance like ocean sails that seabirds swooped to catch the view of strapless gown and sling top shoe This sparkling picture captured bliss in a dance proceeding the wedding kiss and from the sand to look above was to look at just the start of love In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I absolutely love the scene you've painted with this one Martie  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes! Very beautiful! What a lovely place to have a wedding! You've captured the scene wonderfully! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie- You've done it again ! This time in rhyming verse ... and very eloquently, I might add. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ruth, Denise and Marge--thanks for sharing this enchanting day with me. |
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