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The breath of dream
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The breath of dream |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The breath of dream It's the breath of sleep And the wash of its lay, The wake of each sweep, Till it passes away. The hours recast, Of minutes refill, Where time and the past Are virgin and still. Where magic takes place And the heart drinks its fill. Where the rule is grace And age has no bill. Where else can we scheme, But the breath of each sleep? Where the wake of a dream, Is a treasure to reap? Without this release, We would soon be at odds. There would no peace And there would be no Gods. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, This is so lovely, it took my breath away Liz |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Dreams are magic. This is simply wonderful. I'm glad you shared . -SEA  |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Well done there Sy Forgive in case I repeat my self here They say I'm a dreamer, but I'm not the only one" John Lennon. You sure know how to write a dream The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Thank you and many happy dreams to you. Sy Sea, And many happy dreams to you too. Helmut, Have a dream on me. Thank you for your comment. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Your breath of sleep, And of the dream, Are some of the best, I've ever seen. But true breath of sleep, Is hard to endure, That's why there's mouthwash, For that morning-breath cure. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Hope you don't mind if I reply a second time, but I think this is one of the most beautiful poems I've ever read Liz |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Lovely Seymore  |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Seymour: I love "Where else can we scheme, But the breath of each sleep? Where the wake of a dream, Is a treasure to reap?" HUGS Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Beautiful (as always!) and quite lilting, I found myself wishing I had a cot here at work so I could have some dreams of my own. Great work, Sy.May I never be too busy to help another's load, Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed. --Author Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toe, Your always spoofing spooks of death. No wonder you have bad breath. Sy Thanks Elizabeth, Only have one thing to say to you. Love ya Sy Hoot, Well lovely knows lovely. *L* Sy Rainbow, You are my rainbow. *L* Satiate, Then happy day dreams, thank you Sy |
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