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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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Despair Renewed I was captured, cornered like an animal I was in despair Everything was nothing, I did not care Life was dull, I had no love Just a calling from above Into a dark world I had fallen I could hear their constant calling Everyone was my enemy Even my own self I had nothing No clothes No belongings No wealth But then one day I did awake One true love it did take I was woken by a loving face Whose arms held out I did embrace From that day forward, there was no other world My world now is bright and unspoiled |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Very nice, tracie!  'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tracie, This is sooo good. As my husband would say, it's deep.  I enjoyed reading your poem very much. -SEA |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Ah, the tonic of true love. Well done, I enjoyed this poem very much.May I never be too busy to help another's load, Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed. --Author Unknown |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Severn, sea & satiate Thankyou for your kind replys and I look forward to reading some of your pieces. tracie |
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