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Parker
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since 2000-01-06

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0 posted 2000-01-25 05:30 PM

My Youthful World
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When I was one and ten,
young like you were way back then.
a circle had begun,
that binds two futures into one.
Time has come, the years have gone
eight and twenty, since
we lost that bond.
you were just my poor town girl
Dolores of my youthful world
But circles weave, and fate it seems
may tie the ends, for such as me
and maybe bonds, lost so long
return to me, a future girl
Dolores from My Youthful World.

James Parker Haley (c)1999

Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

1 posted 2000-01-25 06:08 PM

Fate is a lonely hunter!
Enjoyed!
DH

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-01-25 06:57 PM

This is beautiful! I love it! Well done!

Denise

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

3 posted 2000-01-25 07:16 PM

OH, yeah, I am a strong believer in this kind of fate!

Lovely!

Corinne

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2000-01-25 07:24 PM

Haleyja,
The poem is well done and I enjoyed it.

devina
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

5 posted 2000-01-26 04:51 AM

Believe and let Fate lead you in the right direction dear!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Parker
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since 2000-01-06

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6 posted 2000-01-26 11:12 AM

Thanks, Danny, Denise, Corinne, Seymour, devina.... I'm not really a big believer in fate, but its a sweet thought.

Parker

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

7 posted 2000-01-26 11:22 AM

This is just lovely
Liz

Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27

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8 posted 2000-01-26 12:47 PM

Parker, yes fate is a sweetened thought, especially for us soft cynics, but what one must do to turn the "fates" around!

Love this poem you've shared!

Claire

Parker
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9 posted 2000-01-26 02:27 PM

Meadowmuse, thank you, I would like to hope that we are somewhat in control of our own fates.

Parker

Parker
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10 posted 2000-09-17 01:51 AM

Lace

grayline oneblack shades

[This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 09-17-2000).]

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