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Lonely Star
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Lonely Star |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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Lonely Star I look up the brightest star As I gaze into the night Reminds me how alone we are Each having their own light Each star is like a person Within a crowd they are alone Their appearance is not spoken Just implied from what they’ve shown Sometimes we see things different From the way they really are To see so many shinning We don’t see that lonely star So next time you are passing Seeing many from afar Take a moment to look inside them all And see that lonely star. Richard Rendall |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
So many memories of wishing on one of those really bright stars. Thank you for this wonderful poem  |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
This has a light of its own. You have made it shine < !signature-->I used to be schizophrenic, but we're ok now and Don't make me mad cause I'm running out of places to hide the bodies......LOL [This message has been edited by First__Knight (edited 01-25-2000).] |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you one and knight was feeling alone in a house full of people when this came to me. Richard |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I could sure feel that loneliness in this. Well done, Richard! Denise |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You can certainly be lonely in a crowd. I have been many times. Very nice poem Liz |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
To be alone is sometimes wonderful, even in a crowd, but to be lonely is empty when you want to be full. Good poem! |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you Denise and Liz Always good to have you comment on my posts. Richard |
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