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Act One...."Take One"
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Act One...."Take One" |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
In my act I don't have things to remember I have things to do In fact I don't even have an act I just act like I do "Take Two" |
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Bad Boy Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 78 |
WOW, where do I start? I can tell that this one took hour`s of thinking,writing and alot of feeling. You really have out done your self on this one Toe. They just keep getting better  I`ll set back and wait for act 2  The Devil Made Me Do It. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
BB....Obviously, you haven't read a whole lotta my crap?...This really is by far one of my better ones? And since I've stopped slamming Balladeer....I just ain't got nuthin left to write about....(as you can tell..."see above").... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
The two bad boys of Passions put on quite a show. And this is just act one. Liz |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
I've heard it's been said this world is a stage. We are actors in dialogues producing a play. We all have our parts, no matter how small; A hero, some jokers, the Villian, a fool. In come the actors, we all play the part, pretending we're something we surely are not. The song's awful pretty, the drama so grave. A huge fabrication but such a display. Since fame's much too fleeting and death's such a shame, we all take our place for the purpose we came. Then the curtain comes down Finale and all, we recall in our memory what the encore neglects. So much for the show, I suppose we should go. All the world is a stage; and the show will go on. I for one am glad that you act like you do =) Cause you help make this place great! Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Is it redundant to ditto Echo? *G* |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hey - Do you always act this way?... or is it all an act??... and did you steal a piece of my eraser???  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Never a dull moment around here!! Denise |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I've got to act to maintain any kind of life?...I know this poem sucks...but what the hell?...I am Toerag yanno?.....and just think? If it weren't for me, yall'd have nuthing but great stuff to read.....and if everything were just great, expertly written, and full of wisdom and wit......we'd all be Balladeer?....Now wouldn't that be a pain in the ass?.... |
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