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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Sys sea gull Sea gulls glide in freedom, Plumbing wind and carefree. Using all their instincts, To stay in perigee. Their graceful overfly, Advantageous forfeit. We thrill in admiration, The fulfill of the debit. It's only seriousness. The hardness of the stay Whose antics are a wonder But his belly drives the way. Freedom is a hardship Cruel and mostly underfed. And if I were a sea gull, I'd drop one on your head. |
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Anne Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 78 |
LOL! Quite an ending you've got there!  Heads up! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I love seagulls, but they do a number on the old car's paint job. Your poem tickled me |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
LOL@the last line!!! Damn SY, hate to know who inspired this one...but being the nosy girl I am...just go ahead and tell me purdy please???? Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
 Seymour- That is SOOOOOOOOOOOOO FUNNY ! ~Marge~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sounds as though someone was standing in the wrong place at the wrong time! LOL. Enjoyed the poem, Seymour... bombs away! *G* |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy Thank you for the laugh You brighten my day Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Anne, Glad you liked the end. Martie, A tickle is worth a laugh. Devina, Well I was honored the other day at the shore. Marge, Your comment was soooooooo good. *L* Suthern, Well something went away. *L* Elizabeth, Any laugh is a good laugh. Love Sy |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, Sy, this is soooo funny!! Denise |
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Bad Boy Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 78 |
OK Seymour, Me think`s you`ve been reading too many of Toe`s writing`s Thank you for the laugh   The Devil Made Me Do It. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Sy Sy SY!!! ROTF....  'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
What should I say, is there anything I can add The live of a seagull must be sad So please if you happen to fly by Please drop your load over onto the next guy LOL Loved it The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise, THe sound of laughter is wonderful. *L* Bad boy, I told them to go and visit Toe. Thanks Severn, A laugh a day keeps the doctor away. *L* Helmut, I gave them the names of all the poets, expect a visit. Sy |
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