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Challenge: In the moonlight, shadows dancing...
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Challenge: In the moonlight, shadows dancing... |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom 
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Standing alone on the terrace < !signature-->her face lit by a single lamp rain splashing her gently her dress transparent caused by damp watchful eyes appraised her from inside as she and the rain danced as one the silhouette the tapping of her heels synchronised beating of his heart had begun completely unaware of the vision she made she lifted her face to the light he glimpsed a smile and heard her laugh turning to face him - he felt passion ignite The voice telling him to take this chance he opened the door with almost no sound as they moved together and began to dance orchestrated raindrops splashing the ground A single owl whispered in the night air bodies locking - retreating then advancing silk slipping off leaving her bare In the moonlight, shadows dancing... Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 01-24-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I am so there! This is beautiful. -SEA |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Rainbow! So romantic and sensual. Lovely dance! Denise |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
1 word enticing =) |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
What a scene you paint, Rainbow! How I would love to be one of those raindrops! |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Ack! (fanning myself furiously) Love the rain, love the dance, love the imagery ... Do me a favor, Rainbow -- post the REST of this in adult, if you please ... k?  --Kess Full fathom five thy father lies, Of his bones are coral made, Those are pearls that were his eyes; Nothing of him that doth fade But doth suffer a sea-change Into something rich and strange... --William Shakespeare, from The Tempest |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Perfection! So romantic! I could feel that rain!  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
RG....this is absolutely lovely. Soooo romantic. And even an owl in it  makes it even better |
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Anne Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 78 |
What a striking picture! You've got quite a gift for imagery! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rainbow- You did it beautifully. It fairly ~dances~ off the page. B~E~A~U~T~I~F~U~L I have been awed by all the different poems that have been created in response to the same suggestion. Such beauty in them all. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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cjs9853 Junior Member
since 1999-11-26
Posts 44smyrna, tn usa. |
That is beautiful So romantic.I can see this |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
A sensory, romatic picture you have painted. I loved this poem! |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Romance just lives in you doesn't it Rainbow I don't buy temporary insanity as they murder defense. Because people kill people. That's and animal instinct. I think breaking into someone's home and ironing all their clothes is temporary insanity. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Nothing more sensual than "dancing" in the rain! Lovely poem! Corinne |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
RG, WOW girl! You left me with one big SIGH! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Rainbow This is absolutely exquisite. Liz |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Incredibly lovely... I can only say WOW... and then leave with a longing sigh... *S* |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh my, oh my...well done, indeed! Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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fc Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 130 |
wow ms. rainbow girl, this is so sensual so incredible, really really loved this, what a beautiful picture you painted for us to see |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Yanno 'bow....I envy the ability of that moonlight to be able to cover and touch your entire body all over all at once.....nice job....really nice.. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Very sensual.... And a nice way to cheat -- adding rain.. LOL |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
Beautiful Mistress Sensual ... ... you must have French ancestors to be so romantic ...  HUSG ! [This message has been edited by JTF (edited 01-26-2000).] |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Ooops...Thanks all... HUGS Memories give you the power to collect roses in the winter... |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Romantic, sensual,beautiful imagery...this is one gorgeous piece Rainbow.... |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Oh Rainbow...this was beautiful and very very romantic!! A challenge very well met!! Take Care Bridgette Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved." |
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