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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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I see so much in your eyes I see past the little lies Lies from your heart I thought them true I can't believe I trusted you What a fool you must think me to be you just don't realize how much I see. -SEA- |
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jascanvey Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 130England |
Lies always get discovered, how painful a verse and yet I understand completely how you feel. My heart is with you. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, how much do you see, Sea? I saw that life was a see-saw but now I see I saw it incorrectly. Oh, I see what you saw, Sea. AARRGGHH!! I see I'm losing my mind!  Very good poem, especially since it isn't true, based on your response to Denise. I'm glad  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Without trust you have nothing, absolutely nothing! Great poem SEA! Denise |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Sea It's hard to let go of your feelings and emotions when you love someone, especially when you see something going on that's hurtful, and at first you block out what you see but it doesn't go away you still see...I hope you get through this and you'll be stronger for it... Tracie  Hugs |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Balladeer, you're fun!  This was true a long time ago. My ex-husband thought he could cheat on me, then lie. I saw right through him. That was just before I left.But, ya,I'm a lucky one, my life is wonderfully different now!Everyone, thank you. Always such sweet wordsfrom friends! -SEA- |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Sometimes they only see what they wish to see Sea....man, that's almost a tongue twister Nice poem |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
(puzzled look) Yammean Balladeer had a mind to lose??? Hmmmm... I didn't know. *G* Great poem, SEA! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Hoot and Suthern, thanks! -SEA |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Well Sea I'm glad you saw.... cause I now see you doing great.. If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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