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G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA

0 posted 2000-01-24 05:12 PM


I can write sunshine
I can write stars
I can write fantasies
Of people on Mars

I can write beauty
I can write pain
I can write words
That drive you insane

There's just no end
To the things I can do
If only you'd ask
I'd do them for you

I can write daytime
I can write night
I can write creatures
In fanciful flight

I can write joy
I can write hate
I can write love
That's born by fate

But the single most thing
That I like to do
Is write about the love
That I share with you

I can write laughter
I can write sorrow
I can write dreams
That tell of tomorrow

I can write smiles
I can write tears
I can write memories
That last through the years

But the one thing I write
That you know to be true
Is deep in my heart
I will always love you

G.A. Webb

© Copyright 2000 G. A. Webb - All Rights Reserved
Wendy Flora
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since 2000-01-11
Posts 182
Virginia
1 posted 2000-01-24 06:00 PM


Ooh ooh! I realy liked this one!  I hope you don't mind if I print it out to go on my Wall of Love...    Bravo! -wen
Denise
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2 posted 2000-01-24 06:01 PM


This is beautiufl, GA! Very nice!  

Denise

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3 posted 2000-01-24 06:04 PM


Oh my, this is sweet. How truly loving. This is wonderful!   -SEA
G. A. Webb
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4 posted 2000-01-24 06:43 PM


Thank you all for your responses. I must say that they put a big smile on my face.  )

As for you Wendy, I would be honored if you printed it out and added it to your Wall of Love. Thanks again!

G

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
5 posted 2000-01-25 06:35 PM


You write so beautifully too!!  Loved this one as well.  Beautiful  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167
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6 posted 2000-01-25 06:51 PM


G.A -

Very tight writing, not an easy thing to do!
I like the confident feel of it, too!

My fave line:

I can write words
That drive you insane

fave stanza:

I can write daytime
I can write night
I can write creatures
In fanciful flight

Corinne

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