Open Poetry #5 |
Time Marches on |
Miss Abagail Mannering Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 136byron, il |
*chorus* They say time marches on but the times have changed, and that love fades out- 'cept it's still the same. Ya work so hard but ya still don't gain. You sacrifice all yet your still in pain. ******************** So, you work on your love and you work for your meal. You don't make enough so beg, borrow, and steal. You try so hard- but let's get real... The world doesn't care about how you feel! Now you're down on your luck ya have no where to turn- and this crazy world don't care if you burn. You've made mistakes and you've tried to learn- you search for help but you're not THEIR concern. *chorus* Now millenium's ehre, it's the year 2000 and the hate and fear in your heart's been rousin' The inferno of rage that you've been housin' you'd better hold back 'fore you need dousin'. Life's gettin' better 'though things are hard. The bills rack up on the credit card. You're reputation's jinxed and you're face is marred; and you got feathered while I got tarred. *chorus* this was written March of 1999 for my friend's band. he really likes depressin' stuff, wo that's what i wrote. "Some people aren't worth a puddle of ant pee in the middle of a dessert when it's 100 degrees in the shade." -me |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas |
Thanks for sharing. I'm glad the mil-bug was a hoax, aren't you? |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Has an interesting message. How was the music? DH |
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Miss Abagail Mannering Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 136byron, il |
i'm very glad the milbug was a hoax... the music to the lyrics hasn't been forally writen out yet, i have a tune in my head for it, but the band disbanded long before it was written out properly. "Some people aren't worth a puddle of ant pee in the middle of a dessert when it's 100 degrees in the shade." -me |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great song! I enjoyed this! Denise |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Ms. Abagail...I'm ashamed to say this, but this is the first I've read of your work, and it's fantastic......And dear God I can relate to it! |
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