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Raindrops |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
As I woke up this morning, I saw the dark clouds As they rolled by, It was dark and misty, This morning, Looking at the sky , Where my heart captured the soul, Yet,It was dark enough to poured the rain down on my checks, Standing outside As the raindrops fell on my checks, My heart treambled with the fear I have inside my heart, The rain's still pouring, As my tears fell on my checks, Wondererd how the time will fly by, As the years go by slowly, My heart with the love I have, Yet ,the rain drop is still pouring, Standing outside through the misty morning, Bringing my memories back, Singing my heart With the joy and laughter, Whisper of the raindrops through the misty morning, The echo through the wind calling, out a whistle , Raindrops falling on my head, Bringing back my memories, As I captured my heart for you, Raindrops ,yet, keep falling on my head, Raindrops |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, melancholy poem, Vandana. It is so beautiful! Denise |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
WEll, now. Didn't I tell you? Beautiful thoughts and beautifully expressed, proving my point without a reasonable doubt I rest my case Liz |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This speaks of sadness  |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Raindrops keep falling on my head, but that doesnt mean my eyes will soon be turning red, crying's not for me, oh.....Such a beautiful poem Vandana! Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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