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whiskey
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0 posted 2000-01-23 12:50 PM


"  For G "

My life it wouldnt be
Without you here next to me
Please dont ever leave my side
Without you life I would hide

Your soul it shines the good
Your heart it cares without reward
Your special and you should know
That I love you , with all my soul



[This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 01-23-2000).]

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SEA
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1 posted 2000-01-23 01:00 AM


whiskey....simple and oh so sweet!   -SEA
hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 2000-01-23 11:13 AM


Please do make sure you give him these tender words  
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2000-01-23 11:18 AM


Whiskey,
Yes simple and sweet, enjoyed.

Denise
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4 posted 2000-01-23 03:29 PM


Short, sweet, little love poem!

Denise

First__Knight
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5 posted 2000-01-24 02:42 AM


Like these words.."Your soul it shines the good
Your heart it cares without reward"

very nice Whiskey

 
I don't buy temporary insanity as they murder defense. Because
people kill people. That's and animal instinct. I think breaking
into someone's home and ironing all their clothes is temporary
insanity.



PhaerieChild
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6 posted 2000-01-24 03:48 AM


Sweet and simply stated. Feelings that leave no mystery to their intent. No games...I like that.

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho



HelmutB
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7 posted 2000-01-24 03:08 PM


I think you said it loud and clear
and also short and sweet there dear
A poem with feelings such as those
Should keep the man you love there on his toes
A lucky guy must be he
the one with the letter "G"
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 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.  



[This message has been edited by HelmutB (edited 01-24-2000).]

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