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Thy Fair Luna
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Thy Fair Luna |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Luna, thy beauty is fair Indeed fairer by far Than for just what you are Surely not how bright or rare Nor your constant repair More so than any mortal device Is the reason I hold you dear For your beauty indisputably clear Those virtues can be counted thrice No, something else must suffice It is not outward appearance descried Which strengthens your beauty To confess this, I feel is my duty To me your fairness is found inside Fair, for how you make me feel tonight |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, JML! Lovely poem! Thanks for sharing it with us! Please check your email for a very special welcome! Denise |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Very nice... Welcome! *S* |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Welcome to passions...lovely poem  |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
enjoyed your poem. You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel. Carol King |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
VERY NICE! WELCOME Look forward to reading more of your work! |
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