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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Half-eaten tea scone - tiny sparrow at my feet enjoys each sweet crumb. [This message has been edited by Beki (edited 01-24-2000).] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Lovely image of poetic detail... nature's creatures interacting. Especially fond of scones (and sparrows)   Claire |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Delightful, Beki! Denise |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
I love sparrows!  Again, I say -- you are the best. --Kess Full fathom five thy father lies, Of his bones are coral made, Those are pearls that were his eyes; Nothing of him that doth fade But doth suffer a sea-change Into something rich and strange... --William Shakespeare, from The Tempest |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Most gracious thanks to you all ladies, I thank you, and the tiny sparrows thank you [This message has been edited by Beki (edited 01-24-2000).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wonderful haiku |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Thanks Hoot |
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