Open Poetry #5 |
haiku 001 |
Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Under August's moon twilight blush of yellow rose - descending desire. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Beki! Denise |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Well then, it could just be that I'm a bit on the -- um -- unbridled side tonight, but I found this to be a bit racier than your average haiku!! Lovely as usual, you are the unchallenged master (mistress?) of haiku -- oh and welcome back, BTW, I've missed your work! --Kess Full fathom five thy father lies, Of his bones are coral made, Those are pearls that were his eyes; Nothing of him that doth fade But doth suffer a sea-change Into something rich and strange... --William Shakespeare, from The Tempest |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Thank you Denise, and you're right Kess, it is a little racier than your average haiku...but a lot of mine are I am glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for the compliment too. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Thank you again, my friend |
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