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Open Poetry #5

The Emphasis on you....

The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-01-23 10:17 PM

do what you HAVE to do
do what you ALWAYS do
just dont THINK of only you
for the WOUNDS you heal today
dont promise a BETTER tomorrow
or keep you from FADING away...

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-01-23 11:07 PM

It surely makes for a poor relationship with the emphasis always on one person.

Denise

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

2 posted 2000-01-24 01:40 AM

Good points, and I must agree with Denise here

Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*

One Who Understands
Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 251
Cedar Rapids, Iowa

3 posted 2000-01-24 01:42 AM

Simple sweet words of advice to be used a guidelines when in doubt.

Great poem

devina
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

4 posted 2000-01-24 01:45 AM

Very true dear, I think you emphasized the right words in this one!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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