Open Poetry #5 |
shadows dancing (hoots challenge) |
Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
In the moonlight, shadows dancing splendors silver on the page of a poem that's so entrancing knows no limits, knows no age words that linger ever after found upon a tired tongue words of tears, and words of laughter words of songs long left unsung shadows dancing from the moonlight upon the words that find there way into my heart into the night into the depths of yesterday [This message has been edited by Kevin (edited 01-23-2000).] |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, Kevin, this is lovely! Welome to our 'dancing' circle! Well, that's two guys! Any more takers? Denise |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful Kevin! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kevin- So pleased to see the ~Moonlight~ that ~Dances~ through your mind. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
im sure we'll be in close company soon d =) thank you martie =) marge.. im gonna have to take you to metaphors annonymous if you dont cut that out lol hehe |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Kevin, this is beautiful......challange well met. I'm loving all the variety of poetry coming from one line |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Nicely done!!! Congratulations! I like this.. it fairly sings! |
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