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JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2000-01-23 12:12 PM


Human relation
Deep insincapation
How can one be cruel
Another kind?
Human relation
The world
Is God's creation
But it's based on
Forever more
On....
????????????

This is a short poem I though I'd try.  Something I normaly wouldn't write, but I thought I'd go for something new!  Ah well, so what do you think?

 JOY


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Anne
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since 1999-12-31
Posts 78

1 posted 2000-01-23 12:44 PM


I know what you mean here--the capacity for human cruelty is often too heart-rending for words...
Bad Boy
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since 2000-01-23
Posts 78

2 posted 2000-01-23 12:50 PM


Short,sweet and to the point
Good job.



 The Devil Made Me Do It.


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