Open Poetry #5 |
All The Lies |
SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
They say true love never dies but what about all the lies All the lies that I thought true All the lies that came from you All the lies that broke my heart All the lies is why we're apart They say true love never dies guess they didn't hear All the lies. -SEA- |
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SnglDad Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 115Seattle area |
Very well written Sea, and how true this is for some. thanx for sharing [This message has been edited by SnglDad (edited 01-22-2000).] |
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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
SEA..."they" have obviously never been on the receiving end of the deceit. Even true love can only take so much dishonestly, before ceasing to breath. Great poem. Simple and poignant. Sherry |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great poem, SEA! Well done! Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very sad Sea |
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Deb Lynne Member
since 1999-08-19
Posts 180Where blue skies meet blue ocean |
Been there...heard all the lies. Only now the one he left me for is hearing the same thing!!!! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Deb, If she can't see through all the lies trust me it's not to worry about,we all walk our own roads. At least it's not you any more! (or me hahaha) -SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I really like this poem, its one all of us can relate to in our lives at one time or another. Lessons in Life...we usually learn them the hard way. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Interesting theory. You do feel that way sometimes. Love your name 'Sea' by the way. Anything to do with the ocean - bliss. Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Isis, I couldn't agree more. The ocean is my favorite place to be. SEA just happens to be my initals! -SEA |
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