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0 posted 2000-01-22 02:23 PM



They say true love
never dies
but what about
all the lies

All the lies
that I thought true
All the lies
that came from you

All the lies
that broke my heart
All the lies
is why we're apart

They say true love
never dies
guess they didn't hear
All the lies.
-SEA-

© Copyright 2000 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
SnglDad
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1 posted 2000-01-22 02:26 PM


Very well written Sea, and how true this is for some.
thanx for sharing  

[This message has been edited by SnglDad (edited 01-22-2000).]

simplyYRREHS
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2 posted 2000-01-22 02:57 PM


SEA..."they" have obviously never been on the receiving end of the deceit.  Even true love can only take so much dishonestly, before ceasing to breath. Great poem.  Simple and poignant.

Sherry

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3 posted 2000-01-22 03:18 PM


Great poem, SEA! Well done!

Denise

hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 2000-01-22 09:21 PM


Very sad Sea  
Deb Lynne
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5 posted 2000-01-22 09:36 PM


Been there...heard all the lies. Only now the one he left me for is hearing the same thing!!!!
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6 posted 2000-01-22 09:45 PM


Deb, If she can't see through all the lies trust me it's not to worry about,we all walk our own roads. At least it's not you any more! (or me hahaha)   -SEA
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7 posted 2000-01-22 10:11 PM


I really like this poem, its one all of us can relate to in our lives at one time or another. Lessons in Life...we usually learn them the hard way.
Isis
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8 posted 2000-01-22 10:26 PM


Interesting theory. You do feel that way sometimes.  Love your name 'Sea' by the way.
Anything to do with the ocean - bliss.

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


SEA
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9 posted 2000-01-23 12:46 PM


Isis, I couldn't agree more. The ocean is my favorite place to be. SEA just happens to be my initals!   -SEA
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