Open Poetry #5 |
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Someday |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you ![]() |
Someday my mind will forget your face Oneday my heart won't miss your embrace I'll just go on and forget what you meant to me not even my soul will hold one memory You were never here never inside my heart -what a fool will believe- to not fall apart. -SEA- |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful and sad. Very well done, SEA! Denise |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Denise, Thank you very much! ![]() |
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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
...and what a fool I have been many times! I really liked this writing, SEA, it feels very familiar. ![]() "Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Very well put. Way to move on. Just by writing this I feel you have let go even more. |
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freeverse Junior Member
since 2000-01-22
Posts 14 |
beautiful poem SEA .. but it's really hard to let go. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely portrait, and I most definitely can relate to this, SEA! Corinne |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Sea, I think we share the same boat right now. Just take it one day at a time. |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
This is a great poem ![]() I know you will get through these feelings. Because you express them so well. |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
This flows so well. Bitter feelings involved and understand I have. First I have seen of your work and I will look for more ![]() Drive it like you stole it...LOL And another thing...When I rev my engine I want people to think the world is coming to a end....hehehe |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very nicely written ![]() |
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