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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2000-01-22 05:08 PM



       Just a little bliss

You are a gentle women, a friend
And will be this, until the end.
You came to me not passing through,
But stayed and shaped my life anew.

Your valhalla to this Vikings prayer,
A reason for a heros dare.
An anchor and a safe atoll,
And my spirits port of call.

A gentle wind my ship to steer,
A song unto my starving ear.
Oasis to my searching goal,
A sip of water to my soul.

El dorado is what you are,
The north star a journeys far.
A touch of color in the light,
A blanket for the chill of night.

I cannot say what you are,
Nor can I explain a star?
You opened up your soul its door.
And I flew in forever more.

So do not fret the harm of this,
It's just a little touch of bliss.

© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2000-01-22 05:15 PM


This is beautiful, Seymour.  
Denise

Martie
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2 posted 2000-01-22 05:17 PM


Your poem Sy, is just a little touch of bliss.
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3 posted 2000-01-22 05:31 PM


Seymour-

Should I have envisioned this?
Such a lovely ~Touch Of Bliss~.
Falling from your fingertips once more,
beauteous phrases by the score.

~Marge~


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Anne
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4 posted 2000-01-22 07:25 PM


Lovely metaphors!  Well spoken!
devina
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5 posted 2000-01-22 07:27 PM


Very lovely, you romantic heart!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Meadowmuse
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6 posted 2000-01-22 07:43 PM


If one could befriend
this sweetened bliss that you've penned
'twould be, indeed, spontaneity,
befitting the banks of Monet
or the mindful regard
of The Wait's BĂ©raud
in certain, 'twould be heartful to me.

Lovely work, this poem of bliss!



tori
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7 posted 2000-01-22 07:44 PM


Sey I can only say that I wished someone wrote this for me.. Phenomenal peice!
Isis
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8 posted 2000-01-22 08:20 PM


Sey beautiful, aah to be adored so would make my day!!  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2000-01-22 08:45 PM


Denise,
Thank you for the beautiful. *L*
Martie,
Thank you.*L*
Marge,
Lovely response, thank you. *L*
Anne,
Thank you for the metaphor well spoken.
Devina,
Yes it is romantic.
Meadow,
Lovely comment, thank you.
Tori,
Thank you for the phenomenal.
Isis,
Thank you.

hoot_owl_rn
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10 posted 2000-01-22 09:57 PM


*sighs* nicely written Sy
Grandma Jo
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11 posted 2000-01-22 10:01 PM


romantic and lovely!
Balladeer
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12 posted 2000-01-22 10:05 PM


Excellent thoughts well expressed, Sy.
Paul Hoekman
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13 posted 2000-01-22 11:00 PM


Wonderful Rythm,
beautiful words,
although one of them
I never have heard.

Earthman

Elizabeth Santos
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14 posted 2000-01-23 07:48 AM


Sy,
Bliss is something we rarely experience in our lives, so if you have a touch of bliss, you are truly blessed
This is a very beautiful poem from the heart
Love ya
Liz

Sunshine
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15 posted 2000-01-23 09:40 AM


It is so nice when your muse returns, Sy.  And of course, the romance rings through.

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow



Nicole
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16 posted 2000-01-23 11:26 AM


What is this?...true bliss?  Oh, I know what that is!  I know the rapture of true bliss every time I read one of your beautiful poems!  

 May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

--Author Unknown

Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2000-01-23 11:28 AM


Hoot,
Thank you sweet. *L* Sy
Grandma Jo,
Thank you.
Balladeer,
Your words to me a little bliss.
Paul,
Thank you.
Elizabeth,
You deserve a little bliss. Love Sy
Sunshine,
Love your comments. *L* Sy

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