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Just a little bliss
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Just a little bliss |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Just a little bliss You are a gentle women, a friend And will be this, until the end. You came to me not passing through, But stayed and shaped my life anew. Your valhalla to this Vikings prayer, A reason for a heros dare. An anchor and a safe atoll, And my spirits port of call. A gentle wind my ship to steer, A song unto my starving ear. Oasis to my searching goal, A sip of water to my soul. El dorado is what you are, The north star a journeys far. A touch of color in the light, A blanket for the chill of night. I cannot say what you are, Nor can I explain a star? You opened up your soul its door. And I flew in forever more. So do not fret the harm of this, It's just a little touch of bliss. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Seymour. Denise |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Your poem Sy, is just a little touch of bliss. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour- Should I have envisioned this? Such a lovely ~Touch Of Bliss~. Falling from your fingertips once more, beauteous phrases by the score. ~Marge~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Anne Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 78 |
Lovely metaphors! Well spoken! |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Very lovely, you romantic heart!  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
If one could befriend this sweetened bliss that you've penned 'twould be, indeed, spontaneity, befitting the banks of Monet or the mindful regard of The Wait's Béraud in certain, 'twould be heartful to me. Lovely work, this poem of bliss! |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Sey I can only say that I wished someone wrote this for me.. Phenomenal peice! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Sey beautiful, aah to be adored so would make my day!!  Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise, Thank you for the beautiful. *L* Martie, Thank you.*L* Marge, Lovely response, thank you. *L* Anne, Thank you for the metaphor well spoken. Devina, Yes it is romantic. Meadow, Lovely comment, thank you. Tori, Thank you for the phenomenal. Isis, Thank you. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
*sighs* nicely written Sy  |
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Grandma Jo Member
since 2000-01-02
Posts 51 |
romantic and lovely! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Excellent thoughts well expressed, Sy. |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Wonderful Rythm, beautiful words, although one of them I never have heard. Earthman |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, Bliss is something we rarely experience in our lives, so if you have a touch of bliss, you are truly blessed This is a very beautiful poem from the heart Love ya Liz |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is so nice when your muse returns, Sy. And of course, the romance rings through. Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
What is this?...true bliss? Oh, I know what that is! I know the rapture of true bliss every time I read one of your beautiful poems! May I never be too busy to help another's load, Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed. --Author Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hoot, Thank you sweet. *L* Sy Grandma Jo, Thank you. Balladeer, Your words to me a little bliss. Paul, Thank you. Elizabeth, You deserve a little bliss. Love Sy Sunshine, Love your comments. *L* Sy |
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