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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
I woke up this morning with a new feel in my heart, no hurt, no ache, not torn apart Alive and awakened with a bright kind of a spark Memories are good ones not sad on my mind, I'm growing, as I'm learning that all heals in time How lucky I am to have been in this sleep And the learning, I did, while sleeping away. Wow.. What can happen when the night turns to day I walked in a dream and loved in a dream, held on to nothing, as something it seemed But the bright sun light shines on me today, it showed me that nothing ever stood in my way Just glad that I'm up now ...this day feels so good, on top of the world here.. like I never thought I could How good this day, that I've awaken too, I am awake,... and nothing reminds me of you © tori 1999 ------------------ If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink vlh. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful, Tori! That's great! Denise |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
tori....this is great! I've been there too. What a beautiful day indeed!  -SEA |
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SnglDad Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 115Seattle area |
I think you have done a nice job here but I think I like the other 2 just a little more. Good Job Joel |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Thank's Guy's  |
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Anne Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 78 |
That last line is almost haunting! Great poem! |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Glad you liked it Anne. thanks... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wonderful title and wonderful poem to match At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet. ~Plato |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Thanks Hoot gald you liked! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Tori, it's so good to see you cheery!! This poem made me bubble with joy! <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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