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Lucie
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since 1999-06-20
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Houston

0 posted 2000-01-22 03:40 AM


Oh my gosh! What’s this I hear
a big boat trip is drawing near?
Michael’s packing Hawaiian shirts,
and Femme Fatale has got the squirts.

Don’t fret my friends it will work out
you’ll have so much to talk about.
With Michael on the cabin floor
and Femme behind the bathroom door.

You’ll remember this for years to come.
I know you’ll just have too much fun.
Cause I know true love never fails.
Remember y’all we want details!



 With perseverance even the snail reached the Ark.

© Copyright 2000 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
One Who Understands
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Cedar Rapids, Iowa
1 posted 2000-01-22 03:43 AM


Sweet, sweet memories

Great poem

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2000-01-22 04:52 AM


A nice one Lucie.   I, like yourself wish them nothing but the best.  May this be a friendship that will never end, a romance that will last forever, and perhaps Love and marriage and a shared life together.  James
hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 2000-01-22 09:36 AM


ROFL

Quit worrying you two...it will be fine  

Deb Lynne
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Where blue skies meet blue ocean
4 posted 2000-01-22 01:05 PM


This is so cute!  Best of everything to Mike & Genn.
Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
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Southern Florida
5 posted 2000-01-22 01:09 PM


Lol...very cute Lucie  
Wishing you both the best...and, YES, we want all the details..well, the ones you can share anyhow!  

Denise
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6 posted 2000-01-22 03:11 PM


hehehehehe....this is adoreable, Lucie!  

Denise

Toerag
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Ala bam a
7 posted 2000-01-22 03:26 PM


On the boat, just you two,
(Both with that damn intestinal flu)
Lovesick, seasick, tons of fun,
One's a pukin, one's got runs.

A honeymoon you'll not forget,
She's kissin and a'holdin' him,
Mike's turned pink from Pepto Bismol,
Femmes loaded on immodium.

Love is truly in the air,
(And so are other gases)
You'll truly know each other well,
As your cruise-time passes.

I wish you both the best for sure,
There is no cure for Cupid,
But for that other "ailment"
Get rest and drink those fluids.



[This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 01-22-2000).]

suthern
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Louisiana
8 posted 2000-01-22 03:54 PM


oops... could ya pass some of that pepto to my server, please? *G*

[This message has been edited by suthern (edited 01-22-2000).]

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23
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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
9 posted 2000-01-22 09:57 PM


This is a real treat - two great poems under one topic - Nice job, Lucie.  And, Toe - I knew you wouldn't miss the chance to zero in on the other ailments - that was a great poem.
Balladeer
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10 posted 2000-01-22 10:21 PM


hehe. Good job, Lucie.

Their lovemaking might be so darn frantic
That boat will sink like the Titantic!!!!

poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
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Arkansas
11 posted 2000-01-22 10:34 PM


ROFLMAO at you Lucie!  hehe  You are too much! I loved the part about hawaiian shirts, and the squirts!     Thank you so much for this little tribute - I know everyone in here just wants us to get gone already, and then come back with all the juicy details!  hehe  Uh...not juicy as in toots...    I sure am glad to see you back to writing that silly stuff!

 ** I'm reaching for the brightest star I've ever seen - knock my ladder out from under me, and you'll wish you hadn't !! -pFF ** Here's to 2000!

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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Illinois
12 posted 2000-01-22 10:41 PM


ROFLMAO!!!  I had tears I was laughing so hard. Love that shirts and squirts. We all want details but please none of the ones from behind the bathroom door!  LOL

You two will have a great time, quite worrying so much!

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Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

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