Open Poetry #5 |
I run to you.... |
Deb Lynne Member
since 1999-08-19
Posts 180Where blue skies meet blue ocean |
I run to you to be in the comfort of your arms I run to you so you can protect me from all harms I run to you because you are my best friend I run to you when I can't seem to see the end I run to you knowing you will help me through I run to you because I can count on you I run to you to give you all that's in my heart I run to you because this is where it all does start I run to you like I've never to run to any other I run to you now I'll never run to another |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This is very sweet Deb |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
I like this one, very nice. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Deb! We all need someone like that! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Very nice-Deb Lynne Running headlong into another's heart ... breathlessly. I like the very image it portrays. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Deb Lynne Member
since 1999-08-19
Posts 180Where blue skies meet blue ocean |
Thank you guys for the encouraging words! I run to this person for everything & just wanted to tell him. He's my whole world! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Having someone to run to, knowing his arms are waiting just to hold you. I love it. -SEA |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I really like this Deb.... Lovely |
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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
You know, has been many moons since I've wanted to run. Reckon you ever forget how? Great poem Deb! Sherry "Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau |
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freeverse Junior Member
since 2000-01-22
Posts 14 |
lovely poem..I like it. |
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