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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Enigma Breathe in Breathe out Heart beats Like a drum One, two, three, One, two, three Feel the hum? The time has come Voices whispering Right to left, Left to right Echoing Through The night Fire's flame Reaching High, so Very high Scraping The charcoal Sky Searching! Above and below Below and above 'Til you find The lust For battle For power For Love Dark Angel What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Wow - DA I really like this. It feels almost supernatural. Well done. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
*G* DA, this poem is even better than the last one I just read from you. Love it ! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This one has a lot of power behind it my friend...almost reads like a chant  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good, Dark Angel! I enjoyed this! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
WOOHOO!! You go girl! Great read DA!! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Dark Angel.....Wow! You gave me tingles! Very cool.- SEA |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Moonshine, thanks hon --------------- WOW Munda thanks so very much!! --------------- Ruth, thanks so much my friend --------------- Thanks Denise I appreciate that! --------------- Rebecca, so glad you enjoyed it Angel Girl! --------------- SEA, so glad to have given you the tingles ;-) --------------- What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
WOW! The passion in this...I like it! Searching! Above and below Below and above 'Til you find The lust For battle For power For Love Great stuff A of L K'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you Sweet Butterfly, I'm glad you liked it What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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