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To Love Again (A greatly edited version from adult)
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To Love Again (A greatly edited version from adult) |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA 
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To Love Again I want to be your destination In this wild passions ride We will drive in wild abandon Me with you here by my side Feel the energy surround us Let the magic now begin Lost exploring one another Finally feeling love again Tender lips in kisses touching Bodies intertwined as one Hands on flesh gently caressing Darling, I have just begun Passions fire hotly burning Waves of desire from within We're together, no denying Two as one, in love again Hearts in rhythm quickly beating Breathless words fall on my ear Once afraid, no longer worried Safe am I, now you are near Pull me close, my heart is racing Let this night of ours begin Take me to the farmost limits As I learn to love again Wrap your tender arms around me Hold me close, don’t let me go Whisper words of comfort to me All those things I want to know What will happen in the morning Could this wanting be a sin I care not, tonight I'm flying In your arms, I love again At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet. ~Plato |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This sure brings back memories! Good thoughts, Ruth. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Ruth, very beautiful!  Denise |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Yes Ruth, very beautiful!! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
Oh my God! How is it that you make me feel all warm and cozy inside every time I read a poem like this from you. Your words are simply emaculate |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Balladeer....I'm glad you like it as the original poem began as a reply inspired by one of your works Echo and Denise...thank you both One Who Understands...I'm glad my words make you feel warm and cozy inside. Poetry should evoke feelings of some kind when it is read. Thank you for one of the highest forms of praise that can be given At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet. ~Plato |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hoot- So lovely. So fresh. So new. Love and it's reflection looks so lovely on you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
I never fail to read your poetry How do you do it is way beyound me This is very nice indeed with words so soft and gentle wrapped in sweet You know surely how to write Now let go of the armour and start to slide Into the world you there describe A very nice piece  The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ohhh Ruth, this is amazing, absolutley beautiful!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Love it, love it, love it! *S* Oh... and did I mention it's really good? LOL |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
So beautiful Ruth !! And, dear, you're poetry always evokes feelings in the reader.... < !signature-->A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon [This message has been edited by Pepper (edited 01-21-2000).] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
So much compassion and an outpouring of emotion here...AND now, of course, I am curious about the adult version! (wanders over to the adult room to see) Corinne |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
True passion is reflected in you words. Very well written! |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Hootessa - does this mean you've gotten lucky?? *innocent eyes* I like the way this poem led me through your emotions. Its always grand to read of love. I hope this is not a repost from times long since past, because then you might be lonely right now and desperate for a man to make you feel complete *chauvinist pig eyes* - lol. This really was a very nice poem, Ruth. I'm just feeling a bit frisky today. Lil Lorelei is the blame for this - not me. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Marge, Pepper, Helmut, suthern, DA, Corinne, and spiked...thank you all so very much LJA...you're always frisky aren't you? |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Ruth, my dear, you need to send me the URL for the Adult version of this!  Breathlessly passionate ... --Kess Full fathom five thy father lies, Of his bones are coral made, Those are pearls that were his eyes; Nothing of him that doth fade But doth suffer a sea-change Into something rich and strange... --William Shakespeare, from The Tempest |
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manalive325 Junior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 21 |
A passionate expression Ruth. You draw the reader in so well, and create the wanting that you express. Your sensuality flames bright in this one and warms me inside. Thanx |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You're amazing Ruth, I've read this in Adult, and it's just as good edited!! Keep them coming dear!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
I refuse to believe that our sweet innocent lil Hootessa would ever have to edit anything she wrote. I simply refuse to believe it. With that said, please don't try to reach me... I'll be in Adult for awhile |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Good Greif! Now I gotta go to the Adult's room!  -SEA |
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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458 |
Very good journey into loving...makes me want to go where you are... and LJA...hurry home....and why is it my fault that you are frisky? I was more than willing this am!!! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
BEAUTIFUL WORK.lOVE YOUR WORK. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow...thanks everyone for your wonderful comments LJA...sorry to have disappointed you, yes...do have one or two postings in adult...or three or four or.... |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Oh my lovely Ruth. I have waited this one out to the end...and in so I must say....I like this version as my passion from you and love that I share comes from the feelings you give me with the simple words.... The ones with the least meaning and how you bring them to life in me. As I have not been in Adult it is this poem of love that I share and it is this that I love about you. Anything more I care to see with my own eyes....Dare not I faint in doing so I truely believe there is nothing you can not do..or a way you can not make me feel....Just with the simple YES...in your voice.Drive it like you stole it...LOL And another thing...When I rev my engine I want people to think the world is coming to a end....hehehe |
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