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Blondie
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0 posted 2000-01-20 07:55 PM



*I know this is poorly written but I didn't have to time to go over it with my fine tooth comb.  It was something that was on my heart and needed to be said.  

My friend the one who never lost a fight, I need you now-
Come to this place, please take me by the hand.
Look at these tears I shed, stand by me in my hour of need,
I know this is hard so don't try to understand.

Please don't cry just take my hand, dear friend,
And please this very hour lead me from this place.
Don't run but chase away my doubts and fears,
I know, I can stop these tears falling from my face.

Please dear friend, I cannot stand to be alone.
I need your hugs and I need your hand to hold,
I need your strong shoulder in my time of need
For my world of fun and laughter has turned so cold.

As you sit next to my bed please be a friend to me
And hold my trembling hands each step of the way
Because while your praying for my frail body to heal
I know God will send an angel to protect me each day.


© Copyright 2000 Melissa - All Rights Reserved
Cutie Putootie
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since 2000-01-20
Posts 54
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1 posted 2000-01-20 08:08 PM


Melissa~
You know I'm here for you anytime you need it, and since I know what your talking about I know how you feel.  I've told you before I went through the same thing and it takes time to heal and you know you'll never recover hun.  But keep your head up and keep your prayers even higher!

Blondie
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2 posted 2000-01-20 08:15 PM


I'm keeping them higher than the highest.  

 "Therefore do not worry about tomorrow, for tomorrow will worry about itself. Each day has enough trouble of its own." Matthew 6:34


HelmutB
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 964
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3 posted 2000-01-20 08:48 PM


The poem touched me
May I send to you an Angel to stand by you on your site.

"Angels"
To sense the presence of an angel is like feeling the wind all around you. You cannot actually see the wind, but you notice it’s movement, and you know that it is there.
(Unkown)

Can you feel the breeze. All the best to you
Hugs and Love



 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


Blondie
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4 posted 2000-01-20 09:10 PM


HelmutB~
I'm so glad it did...because it comes from my heart.

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
5 posted 2000-01-20 09:49 PM


I don't know what prompted this poem...but I do know it came from the heart. The words are touching.
(((Hugs)))


 At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet. ~Plato

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