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Something About Amor
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Something About Amor |
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broker6 Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 132Bellevue, NE, Sarpy |
Something About Amor by ©Richard Budig 2000 Chilly night muffled in fog the kind where, in your mind, you hear a sax crying into the mist as you drift between light puddles falling from old iron street lamps and from way up there in the dark coming from a dimly lit window a female voice sings lilting French something about ami and amor and strangely, you feel better knowing yours isn’t the only heart going home alone in the dark |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I like this, very nice Richard!  What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This one created a sad but hopeful feeling within me. The sax reference was great too. Don't gain my affections and cover my eyes. In blindness I will only swing harder. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Excellent imagery...very nicely written Richard. I could see this so clearly in my mind At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet. ~Plato |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, I agree! This is so beautiful, Richard! Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Reminded me of Paul Newman and Sidney Poitier in PARIS BLUES. Very vivid portrayal, Richard. |
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