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Corey Collier Junior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 17 |
Her eyes burn like fire, full of passion. Melting my frozen heart with a glance. Her sweet and soft touch, like rose petals. Our hearts meet in midair. Love is sparked. The promises. The dreams. Eternity? Shattered. Empty. Frozen. Again. Someone so special to me, killing me. Again. Her flames have scorched my heart. I am alone.... Again. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is really sad Corey, I am sorry. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I can feel the rise and fall of emotion in this one. This is the tone and effect I love in a poem. A delightful find. Don't gain my affections and cover my eyes. In blindness I will only swing harder. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh, very sad  |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
How very sad indeed  ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sad and beautiful. Wonderful expression of the pain. Denise |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Good poem! You portrayed the emotions in the words and the form...  |
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