Sitting on the beach (for my children)

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Munda
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since 1999-10-08

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The Hague, The Netherlands

0 posted 2000-01-20 05:42 PM

Sitting on the beach, listening to the roaring of the sea, watching
every wave wash ashore, only to return to the arms of its mother,
feeling her tender touch reaching out for all life between the naked
sand, feeling her love for each and every living creature within her,
makes me realize once more; I truly love you, from deep within.
Strong and powerful as her waves; tender as her touch, reaching out to
you, as her waves gently reach out to touch the sand, soul to soul;
roaring, for I want the world to know how magnificent it feels
to experience this love; fulfilled with a feeling of complete and utter
love for all that is within me, as it is you who are so much within and
part of me; and because of you, life is a better and sweeter thing and
tears fill my eyes, when I think of the love and meaning you bring into
my life.

Munda

Nicole
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since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

1 posted 2000-01-20 06:01 PM

Oh...my...goodness!

I adore this poem, truly there is no feeling like the love for one's children! *sigh* Thank you for the smiles.

May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

--Author Unknown

Mike
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since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

2 posted 2000-01-20 06:30 PM

Very nice. I enjoyed.

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

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Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 2000-01-20 06:35 PM

Munda...this is very sweet....there is nothing like a mothers love for her children

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

4 posted 2000-01-20 07:06 PM

This is so lovely Munda....I feel the passionate emotions of mothers'love, so evident in this piece...< !signature-->

A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon

[This message has been edited by Pepper (edited 01-20-2000).]

Denise

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5 posted 2000-01-20 07:08 PM

This made me all warm and happy inside. Thanks, Munda!!

Denise

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26

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Ontario, Canada

6 posted 2000-01-20 09:28 PM

Beautiful Munda my friend.

PhaerieChild
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since 1999-08-30

Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon

7 posted 2000-01-20 09:36 PM

Munda, incredibly beautiful!! You have captured the feelings I hold for my children as well in this piece. Very enjoyable!!

Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

8 posted 2000-01-21 07:55 AM

I always say "Don't mess with motherhood".... You say it much more eloquently....

Munda
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since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

9 posted 2000-01-22 08:37 AM

Thank you all for reading and your very kind replies. Yes, kids sure are a treasure and give beyond measure...trouble too LOL.

SnglDad
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since 2000-01-08

Posts 115
Seattle area

10 posted 2000-01-22 08:47 AM

Very sweet and heart warming

Being a father of 3 I can relate to this.
You have really put alot of feeling`s into this and I thank you for sharing.
God Bless

Joel

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